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TwistedPretzel


My heart will always belong to Princess Luna

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Feb
27th
2019

I promise you've seen the last of . . . · 7:15am Feb 27th, 2019

I promise you’ve seen the last of:

And Trixie would also like to point out that, as the situation currently obtains, what Twilight plans on doing 'afterwards' is, ah,” she paused a breathless moment, her ears feeling as if they were bursting into flames, “entirely in her own hooves, as Trixie is in no position to gainsay her.”

That’s played its part, and has been well-established, so, yes, that shant rear its head again . . . I hope! :scootangel:

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Comments ( 2 )

I noticed the repetition, but it wasn’t overdone. It’s something Twilight struggles with, she can’t get it out of her own mind. Don’t be afraid to use it if it serves the story again.

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It’s something Twilight struggles with, she can’t get it out of her own mind.

That was exactly the intention, and reaction, I was striving for. It was just that, after this latest chapter, I started getting concerned about overuse. I’m glad to see that it hadn’t!

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