...fuck.

No other word can sum up so perfectly the one thought that germinated in my head this morning. I just realized I couldn't keep my fic in first person. I missed to many details to that narration.

so yeah.

...fuck.

I'm considering re-writing EVERYTHING FROM THE BEGINNING in third person, just to make my story 'better' (at least, IMO).
What do you guys think?

If I have to do a rewrite, better do it now since there are not many chapters, though I have to admit, I doubt I'll write more than 15 chapters.

Comments

[onsholo]

you can keep those chapters and just write the rest in third person

[Merc Scar]

The first chapters are Strider telling a story yes? so if the story carried on like this with the adventures and shenanigans that Strider Vano and Celestia get into, then at the end of that everyone at the Bar are slapping themselves stupid and want to go to this new world were Celestia comes from where there are no mutants, anomalies and other horrors of the zone (at least not yet).
Then carry it on in third person.