Updates on Shimmering Guardian · 5:28pm Jan 23rd, 2019
I have updated the prologue to make the writing for it a bit better.
As of 1/23/19
UPDATE
Dialogue
Descriptive sentences
Character interaction
Certain physical elements
Better paragraph structure
Better flow
Got rid of the link near the end of the chapter that would play music if you clicked on it (cringey)
CURRENTLY WORKING ON
Shimmering Guardian: The Magic of Trouble (Chapter 3)
Progress: 1,021 words
Goal: Over 3,000 words in the chapter