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Ashen Heart


Hey guys, just a random person writing for some fun. Stick around and see if you enjoy any of my works, always love to hear feedback. ^^

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  • 137 weeks
    I think I'm throwing in the towel...

    .. I don't think I can do this story anymore... With the first chapter being poorly set up, the lack of motivation I feel towards writing it, and the way I feel like its going to be a let down to many on how I plan to finish it.. I'm not sure I want to continue this story... This is where I'm throwing in the towel but that doesn't mean this story has to end with me... I've been thinking if

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  • 171 weeks
    Sorry

    Sorry I didn't have anything uploaded for this weekend I've been working on my YouTube channel all week so I haven't gotten the chance to write that much. I am in the process of writing another side story thing that I can do whenever I need a break from my love of a mother series but that might not be out for a couple weeks. this week thats just starting im gonna continue working on my YouTube

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    0 comments · 132 views
  • 172 weeks
    I got it!

    So as some of ya know I was struggling really hard with my love of a mother series. BUT Ive got it! Ive figured out how I want to story to go moving forward and got it so I know where I'm going forward without trying to fumble my way through. So trust me when I say u guys are going to enjoy the rest of this story and I'm sorry for having u guys struggling with the beginning of it. I can't wait to

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    4 comments · 138 views
  • 173 weeks
    Being Real

    So ik im not the best for consistent uploads on my stories. And honestly I'm not going to make some lame excuses for it either. Truth is that these stories are pretty low on my priorities list and I don't have the time I used to when I first started this page. So until I move to Texas hopefully around summer of next year the uploads are going to be sporadic, and I'm not sure if it'll change when

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  • 205 weeks
    Working on it

    Working on the next chapter sorry got a bit delayed had stuff come up ended up getting the virus. But I'm starting to feel better and im currently working on the chapter.. its not going to be a big story driven chapter yet thats for the next chapter this one is just pushing it forward a bit... anyways sorry if im not making sense brains still a bit fuzzy sometimes.. anyways I'm working on the

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Nov
10th
2018

Regards to my last story · 3:57pm Nov 10th, 2018

Some of you guys may have noticed I posted a clopfic for my last story. It has been poorly received so far. My only question to those who have poorly rated it, is it because of the topic it is discussing or is it because of the writing? Because if it is because of the topic, I think it is unjust to give the writing a poor score. If you don't like the topic that it is discussing then don't read it. But you giving it poor ratings reflects back on my writing ability and may tarnish any future stories potential. Look I know not everyone is on board with clops, let alone with the topic I discussed in the clop itself, but that doesn't mean that the writing itself wasn't good. You can read a murder story but still enjoy it because of the writing. You can read "romance" novels and still enjoy it for how well it was written. Look I'm not condoning the events of what happened in the story. I don't believe its right either. But you also focused solely on one of the issues and not both of them. So I'm honestly ashamed and appalled that no one else so far has commented on the rape in the story. So before you go rating my story because of the topic discussed go read through the whole thing and comment on the writing. Topic shouldn't matter if the author can write properly. I don't want comments on the topics discussed in my stories. I'm looking for critiques on how to better hone my writing skill. So as my mother taught me, if you don't got nothing nice to say don't say anything at all. I am open for critiques, but if you're only going to comment on how wrong my story is for the topic discussed then that is not helping me and doesn't change anything. So help me be a better writer by critiquing my writing and not saying how wrong the topic is. Technically that was the goal of the story after all, it is wrong for BOTH topics discussed in it. Maybe if I get good enough I can start writing stories requested/commissioned of me, but I can't do that without help of critiques.

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