Chapter 2 is live!

Hello there!

I just uploaded the newer version of chapter 2. I made the following changes :

-> Improved Peter's logical reaction by applying the patented "logificator 2.0"
-> Added a more serious tone to better suit the drama in this chapter
-> Kept the comedy spirit, improved the jokes and funny moments
-> Added more than six pages in total to the chapter! (+/-6k words)

I hope you find them to your liking. Please, if you have the time, I'd appreciate it if you could give it a read and tell me your impressions.
Afterwards, I'll decide to whether continue on improving the next chapter or write the continuation of the story.

Thank you for reading!

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