story update

Alright guys, my beta reader (0_0) had finally pulled through and got me some feedback from my chapters, and oh boy were the mistakes obvious when pointed out. these chapters have been updated now. nothing major, just basic mistake removal, and a bit of a toning down of the whole bracket system.

now, I'm not holding my breath here, but I might be able to have the next chapter out by Wednesday at the earliest. But after that, I'll have some college work to get on with, so writing will be put to the wayside for a bit. I hope you guys understand, and I'll catch you soon..