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MorbidTheBrony


'Ello stranger. Welcome to my little cave. Boy, do I have a story to tell you...

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  • 2 weeks
    6 Years

    So, obviously, today (April 15th) marks 6 years since I first created this profile, and it's obvious by my output over the last, like, 4 hasn't been too much. Got a bit done in 2023, which I'm going to go over through the course of this post, but I have a few things I want to say first. I'm just writing these words as they come to me so sorry if this feels a bit disconnected.

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  • 22 weeks
    New Hellish Horizons

    "Relinquish yourself of the binds, and bring yourself forth,
    Give in to the sorrow, and be reborn whole,
    Curse all traitors for their breach of faith,
    Forfeit lost hope, and become one with the Betrayed."

    The hellish adventure continues soon...

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  • 54 weeks
    5 Years

    (WARNING: I WOFFLE A LOT)
    How in the ever-loving, Jiminy Christmas did this happen?

    April 15th, 2018, a teenager moved on from the past that held him back, and decided he wanted to explore a new medium. Thus, he created a FiMFiction profile and wrote down whatever episodes came to mind, and 5 years later, he's still going.

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  • 80 weeks
    "Sunset's Hellish Adventure" Announcement

    It's been a gruelling 9 months between the release of the last chapter and now. Chapter 13 has been my most challenging piece to date, with me making dents but never seeming to go anywhere. I began wondering if I even had the capability to complete something as big as this. But now, I've done it.

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  • 85 weeks
    Sunset's Hellish Adventure Ch. 13 Snippet

    Been a while, eh? Believe me, everyday the next chapter of this story still isn't out pains me to no end.

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May
3rd
2018

My Problem With "Growing Sun" · 11:44pm May 3rd, 2018

Okay, so as you may know, "Growing Sun" is my first story on this website and it has been doing much better than I had anticipated. I just want to say thank you to everyone for all of the nice things that you've all said.

I'll admit, writing is very fun but it can get pretty damn difficult as you progress through the story. I'm already six chapters in with Growing Sun and now I'm having some troubles in terms of the plot. I want to start making Sunset the bully at CHS but I just can't figure out how I could possibly approach this.

Believe when I say that I've tried, attempts have been made and have utterly failed. It would either sound so dull or even rushed. I want to make this story as exciting and as fleshed out as I possibly can but when it comes to writing about a bully, I cannot tell you enough of how difficult that is for a person such as me. I've never been a bully (nor have I really ever been bullied), I'm more of the shy and kind of insecure student at school. I don't know how exactly I can write through the perspective of a bully if I've never really had any experience with a bully. I don't know whether I should make Susnet go all out there or start her off slowly and she'd become worse and worse of a bully as it progresses. As I've said, the next chapter will be called, "Starting Off Small..." so the second option is probably the best way to go.

Besides Growing Sun, I have already started on another story. It's nothing to special; it's only purpose is one: Mainly just for filler. And two: Just for shits and giggles. It will only be a one chapter story ranging at around 3,000 to 5,000 words. What does everyone think? Should I release this other story inbetween production, or after I'm finished with Growing Sun.

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