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Lawrence Gander


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  • 578 weeks
    Changed Summary

    I have changed the summary, to one that is hopefully a better attention grabber and tone setter.

    From this:
    After vanquishing a cruel tyrant, a group of seasoned adventurers find themselves within the world of My Little Pony. Can they find their way back home? Have they brought danger to Equestria with them? Read on to find out in this action/adventure tale.

    To this:

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  • 579 weeks
    The featured box

    Update story

    Go have some lunch

    Come back, see followers comment.

    Think he's pulling my leg

    Check the featured box

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  • 589 weeks
    Plans

    Sorry about the total lack of updates, those familiar with me know that i tend to go a LONG time between updates. Mostly thanks to various excuses. You know like life, confidence issues, and whatnot. Hopefully though i'll get back on track soon, I've been trying to figure out a few hurdles in DDF's story arc and have been needing to rewrite a lot of what is in my head, i also have re-edited the

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  • 598 weeks
    Chapter 14, done and done.

    Just here to taunt you and say i'll be uploading Chapter 14 tomorrow at around 3-4 o clock. So basically 15 hours from now.

    Special thanks to my pre-readers and such, I think this might be a rather special chapter.

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  • 599 weeks
    The status of Chapter 14

    As many of you know, i had to split Chapter 12 in two parts. So that basically means that Chapter 14 is done and already pre-read, however i feel like i must see what happens within the season 3 premier before i release it. I don't really think season 3 in general will damage or kill my fic in any way (hooray for Alternate Universe tag!), but all the same i want to see what will be up with the

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Oct
25th
2012

Proofreading and other stuff about the nearly done Chapter 13, THE REPOSTONING!!! · 5:27pm Oct 25th, 2012

Edit: I am not sure if the first blog post was sent to the correct people, so i am reposting it so that those who are watching for updates from DDF can receive it FOR SURE.
Thise does mean that the deadline for obtaining pre-readers has extended, so feel free to volunteer yadda yadda



FINALLY!!! Got chapter 13 all written up, all it needs is a few editing passes. Which is the purpose of this blog post. I didn't want to assume that my previous pre-readers would always be available so i am once again making a 'call to arms' post. There of course will be a slight catch with wanting to be a pre-reader, as i am still trying to create a simple and easy way for us to communicate effectively.

All in all i just want those who are willing. If you think all you are good at is grammar, go on i could always use that. What's that you say? You can only offer insight into the overall plot and the stories progression and pacing? Fine then, hope aboard. SO long as you believe you can offer good criticism or help, BY ALL MEANS VOLUNTEER!

Now as for a plan of action, such as a deadline, i do have one this time as stated below for those who wish to volunteer. Otherwise, rejoice readers for we are on the home stretch of another chapter launching, just about another 4-7 days. YIPPEE!

OH YEAH, before i do that. I got a handful of messages from people across multiple sites that i should... of all things.... make a facebook page for DDF. Do you guys really think that would be worth it? I mean i don't know honestly, is there enough of a community that i should try to get something like that off the ground? Would you all want to talk about my fanfic in a community setting? I mean honestly i have no clue. If you have any ideas go ahead and shoot, if it helps you guys enjoy my story i am all for it.



-For Pre-reader's

You are better off private messaging me to volunteer instead of leaving a comment here.
Document in question is 9,600 words or so, i want to try and launch within the next week. The earlier the better, but don't sacrifice or push yourself for me.

You have 24 hours from the time of this blog post to volunteer, i may say yes even past that deadline but you'll have to be close to its conclusion.
I might end up with multiple pre-readers (more than likely i shall). In such case i will still laucnh ont ime after 2-3 of you have turned in any finished edits, any others i will get to but once the deadline passes the first priority is launching the chapter. Any late edits turned in will be added over time post launch day

You will use a cloud based document editing software that runs in a browser (no download or install needed). If you need help understanding it simply ask, or if you have a preference for another type of editing type just let me know. I can be flexible.

The 'software' in question is piratepad.net, feel free to check it out. And as i said before, i am flexible and will try to give you whatever you are most comfortable with using.
I would ask that all pre-readers give me a daily progress report as shown below. If you cannot edit on any given day that is no biggie, if i receive no progress report that day then i shall assume you had more important matters to attend to.


-daily report format
Started scene: Title
Ended scene: 3
Major Concerns/Criticisms: Rarity seems far too frilly, if i remember right she wasn't such a crybaby. Perhaps she can still be scared by what she has seen but not so much that she was driven to frantic and erratic spouts of hyper-tears.




And that's that, hope you will consider pre-reading, and as always we can discuss stuff in PM if you have any problems and whatnot.

Yours,
Lawrence Gander.

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Comments ( 1 )

Would consider it if I wasn't in the middle of re-reading your fic to make sure I could remember most of it before reading the newest chapter.

Oh, and the lack of responses might be because of your low amount of watchers and/or low amount of favorites on the story. I think there are a few groups out there for prereaders and stuff, try finding one of those, I'm sure there are a few out there somewhere that got the time to do it.

Good luck with finding people for the proofreading :)

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