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Lightning_Striker


The Sun sets each day, though see it we do not. And Shimmering it leaves us, and another day ends. But as the Twilight starts, the day again shall come. So, too, we must Rise.

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  • 291 weeks
    Days in the Sun

    Yesterday, late yesterday, I released a story for Sunset Day. Days in the Sun.

    This, however, is different from my other stories, solely based off the genre.

    I had fun writing it, despite the genre.

    I hope to be updating my other stories, Wings of Time and the Rising Universe soon, but school is hectic this semester.

    Until next time!

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  • 293 weeks
    I'm not dead!

    That's right! I'm writing again!

    Today I updated Friendship Rising. I hope to be updating more regularly.

    I also have been working on Codename: Autumn, which is a fic that I have not released the actual title yet. It's going rather well. It should be released in a few months.

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  • 312 weeks
    End of Month Progress Report: April (and March)

    Yes, I know I missed March, I'm sorry. So, I'll be covering two months this time.

    First, my numbers for March:
    8721 words for Friendship Rising
    1023 words for The Sunset Also Rises: Holiday Specials
    1016 words for The Love for Family, A oneshot set in Rose Quill's Homecoming Universe.

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  • 315 weeks
    The State of the Universe

    Hello all, Lightning Striker here!

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  • 317 weeks
    Editing, or Lack Thereof

    Hello again!

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Mar
27th
2018

Friendship Lessons · 7:01pm Mar 27th, 2018

Hello all! I know that some of you read these! But now it is me who is asking you to help me out a little. There will be spoilers up through my Trials of Many chapter in Friendship Rising, so do not read any more if you have not gotten their yet.



Alrighty, now that you are all caught up, I will again state that this fic is NOT a rehash or a rewrite, I will not be rewriting episodes and such, except perhaps big ones, such as finales and premieres. But, this is where I need your help. I need other content to fill in the spaces between those big episodes. Sunny needs to learn friendship lessons, and overcome her own flaws, because, just like everyone else, she's not flawless, she's a work in progress, she's got dents and she's got quirks, and it's her flaws that make her work, wait, I'm singing again, I apologize. Anyways, what friendship lessons would you all like to see? And along what other characters would you want to see her have full episodes with?

Yes, I do have some plans, but I simply do not think I have enough ideas, so give me your own! Thank you all!

Comments ( 3 )

Personally? I want the Trixie and Gilda episodes to be redone, with different friendship lessons for them(don't look at me for ideas, this is off the top of my head), but with Sunny and those respective characters as the focus.

An idea for the Gilda episode could be that Gilda is just socially awkward with ponies, given that she grew up around griffons, who have a rougher culture in general, and just doesn't know how to interact with ponies in what would be considered a "normal manner". Given how Sunny also grew up in a different culture than the one she was born in, she would be understanding(read: empathetic) of Gilda's situation, thus putting Sunny in a position to help Gilda.

I think something that would make for a good overarching plot point for this story is Sunset debating with herself and her family on whether or not to reveal her true origins to her new friends.

While I believe she should eventually open up about it, this dilemma would provide an excellent means of charting Sunset’s growth as a character, as well as provide a good point of conflict between her and the other characters, as those in the know would push for a reveal or continued secrecy depending on who’s arguing, while those around her would develop suspicions as to what her secret may be.

If this were to be condensed into a single episode, I would do it through Sunset telling her friends or the CMC a story from her world, and then they start clamoring for more.

As for one specific episode, I would like to see one where the sisterly bonds between Sunset and Twilight are held in comparison with those of Applejack and Apple Bloom as well as that of Rarity and Sweetie Belle.

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Thank you both for your ideas! They are both very helpful and have caused even more wheels in my head to turn.

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