Muse frustrations

So I feel I may have bitten of a wee be more than I can chew. I've been writing a story, I'm working on chapter five now, My problem is i intended it to end as a romance with a fairly slow burn but i'm use to writing poetry as well as adventure stores held up with vivid imagery and little dialog so this is very new to me. If anypony who reads this find it in their hearts to give me some advice on how to properly write a slow burn romance and maybe read my story and point out any mistakes I would be grateful. Thank you and as always let the water of life flow freely.