Complete story rewrite

Yup... didn't like what one, so I've done on my Shadow story. Expect the first chapter up in a bit, and enjoy as Shadow enjoys being occupied for a year by opponents within (her foal, and the convenient reason she could take a leave from Canterlot to somewhere tropical, decidedly free of nobles, and she can plot out her strategem for her clans eventually turning her into a mare that would have made General Bucephalis look like colt playing at being in a war) and without, Midnight and Sunbeam, who somehow had declared themselves kin when Shadow said she would never say who the sire was (and was waved away by Sunbeam and whom Shadow knows now is her childs sire whether she or they like it or not. She'd rather let her child be the target of a suddenly very parentally focused mare then risk her going out and having her own) her daughter Gale (playing her born to be role as being Shadows early days of wanting children wanted to skip the whole getting stallions cock in her thing and skip ahead to where the child could respond to orders) and her own personal one stallion shop for all her gut that fucker needs, the gray fox of the Everfree, Sunbeam's source for when she's in the mood for not Shadow, the stallion Grim Striker. And Midnight... as herself. She like skulls, hugs, and is suddenly a big sister. As one can tell by her face... she is the least fucked up person in Shadow's life.

She often sits in her quarters and ponders her new child in her, and asks "When the flying fuck twins did I ever give any of these demented creatures a yes to being in my life? Please come normal baby... A nice earth pony, a pegasus... A not unicorn if thats all you got. Or at least draw from my Stock of bloodline madness" And so her story begins as he grooms... and sings