Woah! Suddenly: Chapter! · 12:17am Jan 15th, 2018
That's right! It's back, ladies and gentlemen, and we've got a brand new conflict set up right at the end of the chapter.
This chapter... was SUCH a pain to write. There were SO many points where I just couldn't figure out how to write the scenes I want. There were at least 5 full rewrites of the Fluttershy scene, and trust me, I'm not fully confident in the chapter because of that. I had to sacrifice a lot of stuff to make it work, and by god, I hope it was worth it.
I'm willing to scrap the chapter if need be, because I think that the whole thing didn't come together as well as planned, but whatever. I'll wait and see.
Next time, on Not A Crazed Gunman: Uppercutting evil woodland creatures, a hairless "bear", and a severe lack of sandvich. Yikes, sounds intense.
