Why My Story is Canceled

After many tries at the story and editor after editor left ( at least 12), I deiced to canceled this story. "Coup" is the third or fourth try at this story and went under different names like "Echoes in the Stone." Others have told me that my writing is borderline atrocious or at least my grammar is. Heck, you can see my summary of the story has errors in it. After many years of trying, I decided I can't pull off this story. On top that, I reached a point in chapter 3 where I don't know how to pull off or procedure . Another thing is that no one is interested in Doctor Who x MLP fic anymore. The Whovians in the brony community have sort of wandered off. So there goes my instinctive to write this story.

Since I will never come back to this story, I mind as well sum up the story, if your curious where this story might go. I have been told that the idea is quite brilliant, but I can't execute it.

The story would have Cadence and Twilight killed, while Flutters and AJ investigated what in hey was going with this assassination happening almost back to back. They would have discovered Prime Minister; the Master has been planning a Coup in Equestria. Only to find its too late and the Master is already won and shows are true colors on the night of Grand Glapping Gala. The story at this point would introduce The Queen of Blood who's unique talent is death. This story would end with Master, and the Queen of Blood is looking over Equestria as they won, as Flutters, RD, Luna, Pinkie, and Rarity are capture, while Celestia and Luna are on the run; While Spike is traveling with the Doctor.

The next story will involve Applejack forming a rebellion are going to Los Pegasus and the surrounded to met up with others who want to strike against him. Applejack would meet Capetian Jack Harness at this point. The reason why Jack didn't see the Master coming was that he was busy with another assignment that Luna handed to Torchwood. After Bon-Bon Monster Hunt's group was disbanded, Torchwood replaced it. At this point in the story would see The Queen lift a city and destroy with all the inhabitants in it. Applebloom and Babs Seed would be arriving in a dominated Manehattan. They would survive in the swear. In the end, The Queen would kill Babs and torture, Bloom. In the tortured session (which, in the story, would only be told she was abused because it would be too much). The Queen would reveal her identity to her. The point of the session was to lure AJ out of hiding, which the Queen successfully does. At this point, it would be AJ's and The Queen's first fight. They go at it for some time, but the Queen comes out on top with AJ losing to limbs and losing her sister in the process.

Alight, for a summary this is getting too long for the Book 2 summary, so I'll cut straight to the climax. The twist is the Queen of Blood is Twilight Sparkle. Twilight now doesn't care about anything anymore, except for the bearers of the elements to stay alive. You see ever since she woke up she has heard the same phrase over and over again, "She Will Not OutLvie Her Friends," over and over. So now Rarity and the rest are inside Twilight's mind. That's right one body five minds. The book would end with The Doctor and Spike coming to Equestria with Luna dead, and Celestia captured after a massive duel with Twilight in Ponyville , with Twilight's castle's destruction. They are other plot details, but that's the board of it.

The story altogether would see Spike talking about how he saw what Twilight would become if she continues down the road and she becomes a vengeful God. Yes, I was planning on a prequel to the story where we would have Twilight creating a TARDIS-Dyson Sphere hybrid. Anyway, at the end of the tale, Spike becomes King of Equestria with Master main cast dying, as result of the victory from the Master's defeat; thus having the words come true.

I wish the story would be told,but it need to be told by someone who is great at writing , which isn't . I have been stuck at Book 1 for years, that is an obvious sign I can't pull off this story. I really really wished I told all this story, but I can't due to lack of good editors, the fact Im not that good enough to pull it off and that its was too ambitious for me as as well. Combine all into one. well now you see why I decided to can the story. To anyone who read this thanks for understanding and if you have any comments or questions please post them.

TLDR: My story was going to be 4 part epic involving The Master, from Doctor Who, taking over Equestria. So after 4 tries of trying to get this story off the ground and after at least 12 editors left me on while working on this story and me not having the skill to pull off this kind of thing because its too ambitious, I decided to cancel the story. Again to anyone who read this thanks for understanding and if you have any comments or questions don't be afraid to speak up.