Holiday Update and Side Project (Need your help) · 10:25pm Nov 21st, 2017
As the holidays are rolling by once again, I decided at least for thanksgiving weekend and the latter half of December I'm taking a break from writing the next chapter for various reasons. Not just because of the holidays, but the issues surrounding my new computer that I'm really upset about (and it can be either to get it fix or I can stick to my old one for a while) and the possibility of moving back up to my hometown state due to personal reasons that I can't address.
But just because I am taking a break from writing new material doesn't mean that I'm not willing to go back for a little while. As you can see, I am about 90% done with the story (with 3 chapters left to complete) and I am both sad and happy that I get to spend the last 2 years typing down a story that I hope bronies and pegasisters (shipper or not) will enjoy.
Which is why I am starting a new side project. As you can see from 'Element of Kindness', I'm not a very experienced writer and I tend to make some errors, whether it be some words I misspelled or I didn't use the right noun or verb. So I decided to do what Alexandrite Ward did with his/her "The Opera Phantom Discord" (an really good story, by the way) and edit and revise my previous chapters and possibly the last 3 chapters. Mainly from this I plan to correct all the grammar errors that I've made while also adding or revising a few details just for the sake of the story. This is where you guys come in. As I like to handle some revision by myself, I would love to hear some feedback for any mistakes or suggestions that you have grammar-wise. As I am writing this, I had already did the revision for the Prologue, so if you want, go check it out and see if I made it better or if there are still problems I need to fix.
That's all I had to say now. I hope you have a nice day and I wish everyone a happy holidays
