Screwball: Pony of Chaos

The story

So I read this and it feels like there was a bit to be desired - nothing I'd call terrible. It just feels like the author had some decent ideas but wasn't too sure what to do with them. We have Screwball at a carnival. There is a world of possibilities but we get what I feel like is the bare minimum.

I would love to see the author pick it up again and make it an episodic fic of the life and times of Screwball.

Sorry if this wasn't such a great review or anything. When it comes to fan fics, I'm a little "out of the game" so to speak. I think I'll try to tackle things in my Read Later list. When? I don't know. I never saw this coming myself. Not too mention I finished reading this story a while ago.

And if you're a follower, thanks for taking the time to read. It means a lot to me.