OK, you all win I give up! · 12:51pm Aug 15th, 2017
OK, You all win I give up I have taken down the sadistic chapter and will repost it under a new title it will be a much much much lighter version than the one that I posted earlier. I was simply trying to out do the hospital chapter and while I thought it was good and dark as heck I can see that you didn't like what I did to Trixie. However, that doesn't mean I will get rid of that chapter entirely I will be posting it to another website called http://archiveofourown.org/ at least on that website I can let out my....darker side without having to worry about people getting upset over it.
The new version will have Trixie meet a snake called Kindness, and she will also talk to Sunset rather than being forced into talking to her through torture. As for the CMC, I feel that they should still be punished but I won't do what I did in the last attempt with that last chapter that I posted. I'll find some way to give Sunset's character justice but not like I did with Trixie. So if you all want the darker version of this story go to http://archiveofourown.org/ and look up my screen name which is the same as it appears here on this website.
Sorry if I let you all down.
I'll try to do better next time.
It was quite a masterful chapter
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Yeah well, no one liked it so I am redoing it. There will be a snake and a spider and a feather used in the newer version of it maybe even a rat and a skunk.
Damn, I actually like it.
Ah you didn't let us down, your a good writer mate :) we just felt that this was a.. little too far ^^'
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I am very hopeful that the newer version of it won't be too far.
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Ah I'm sure it won't but just do your best and know when to cross the line and you'll be fine
Overall though your a good writer mate :) don't be discouraged by the reaction. And to be fair you did warn the readers it was dark ^^'
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Thank you, I needed to hear that after the reaction I got from the last attempt at that last posting.
Fuck there was a darker chapter out and I missed.
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I can send it to you via pm if you like I just don't want to hear any complaining about how dark it is.
Please do I don't complain about things that are dark. Pm me the chapter if you can.
Omg that chapter was fire so good I think I like your sadistic side. Thank you for sending me that chapter.
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You are welcome although I wish everyone else had seen it that way as well. Would you like to see the fluffy one?
Sure I have time.
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Ok, hang on while I copy and past it to a PM for you.
I liked the original chapter better, but still....
Aw the fluff chapter was sweet, though I hope you make a sadistic chapter for the crusaders😈
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Would you like me to PM you the fluff version of the Sadistic chapter?
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I doubt anyone would actually like to read something like that. I could try making one for archive but like I said I doubt anyone on this website would want to read something like that.
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No thanks.
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alright, I just thought I would ask as that chapter doesn't have any torture of any type in it. Basically, Sunset just shows Trixie a few animals and Trixie freaks as she doesn't like snakes, Spiders, or skunks.
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Weak, you should have just left the chapter alone.
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Well everyone whined about it being too dark and too graphic now everyone is whining that it is weak and not graphic at all. It's as if no matter what I try I can't win so that is why I gave up.
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Oh......
sorry about that.
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So as I said if you like you can judge the weaker chapter for yourself if you like or not it's up to you. But either way, I gave up on it as I am now stuck trying to find a medium between dark and fluffy which is why I am almost ready to toss the whole story out and work on something else entirely.
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Whoa....
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what did I do something wrong by saying that I am at my wits end with this story? which I am by the way.
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No I'm just shocked.