Good news AND! Bad news · 9:25pm Jul 18th, 2017
Good news is I buckled down a got maybe about 3,000 words down! Maybe more!
Bad news is that it wasn't for The Swarm of Equus it was for yet another new story!
I know a lot of you are probably disappointed by that. But I was on a transformer kick and got a good idea for a displaced transformers fic and just couldn't stop myself.
Cybertronians of Equestria
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I used to be your everyday guy, before that damn merchant sent me here.
I went to Comic-Con with five of my friends. We were cosplaying as custom transformers, since we were all pretty big fans and thought they were cool. He called us off to the side, and next thing we know is we're hurdling through the sky of some frozen wasteland. After a pretty damn hard landing. We were greeted by the last thing we expected, an alicorn, more specifically Celestia.
A few of us myself included, were fans of MLP so we were pretty excited about actually being in Equestria. What we were not excited about was that we found out the Pony's and Griffins were in the middle of a war. Celestia was nice to us, she understood we had no place to go, and found us a place where we could live in isolation. We were grateful so we all decided to help her win this war.
The one thing we didn't expect however was her betrayal.
Banishing Luna hit her hard... REAL hard. She went mad for a few years. She shut us out slowly, stopped talking to us altogether eventually, just sending messengers to us. We didn't realize what was happening. When the final battle of the war was over I saw her there standing on top of a hill. Her eyes were cold, emotionless. She couldn't even look us in the eye. I saw her whisper something and then it all happened... The next few minutes all happened so fast we barely knew what was happening. The Pony's we fought for had betrayed us. Most of us made it out in time. MOST.
We managed to get back to our base and seal ourselves inside. We went into stasis.
Well now we're back and so is Luna. We went knockin for revenge, but thanks to Luna, Tia talked us down. Convinced us to give her a second chance.
But lets just put it this way. If she blows it, it'll be the last mistake she ever makes.
So does the new story sound good or bad in your opinion.
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