New Chapter almost done

And yes I have heard the criticism. Thanks for the comments though. Really had to take some time off to take them into consideration and realize what I wanted to write might not impress everyone and that the way I write characters definitely turn some people away Good criticism is good criticism to be sure- way better to know what might be turning some people away at the moment than silence and no explanation to a small influx of downvotes. But yeah we are now going to be back on track.

And maybe Fluttershy is a bit too out of character.

I have no idea why I do that. Just seems to be action girl Fluttershy for some reason.

My bad.

But yeah this was actually important since it does make us see a bit in Crystal Prep hierarchy here.

And also the fairy realm of Avalon will be super important in later stories anyway especially when I get around to Rainbow Dash's one so while the main criticism that I do take is that now the story got too complicated from a murder mystery- I wanted to get that out of the way now than finish this story and introduce a whole other realm that totally existed for forever and just never got mentioned.

Read too many stories where people did that. It felt jarring either way I could do it.

Was it a perfect introduction? Almost assuredly not. But its still an important part of the story and these two chapters introduce Fleur and Cadance, and Roseluck (though to a lesser extent since she's A. more laid back and less word ranty and B. Works in Canterlot High) But I need to finish this final bit, proofread it and all that. And that's more a job for tomorrow. And yes it will be a talky chapter.

My bad for sometimes liking legal drama and writing the way I write. Its a style that I know can definitely turn people away.

Seriously thankful for those who like the story though and favorite it. You guys rock.

See you soon.