Onward to Chapter 5! · 3:09am Oct 22nd, 2011
Hello again, everyone! It's just me, making another update. For those of you that didn't catch the first notice, I am finished with Chapter 4, it's up for your reading pleasure, and I am now working on Chapter 5. I really enjoyed writing Chapter 4, but for some reason, I just can't shake the feeling, the chapter feels....bloated, for lack of a better term. Maybe it's just me, but I sense the stench of redundancy and yet I did not catch it while writing it. Maybe I just don't like writing up padding?
Then again, this feeling may have something to do with the fact that I barely even had to try hard to get this chapter to flow through my fingers and onto my keyboard, and it's slightly longer than Chapter 3 which took infinitely larger amounts of effort on my part. I dunno, let me know what you think, maybe I'm just paranoid!
So I got Batman: Arkham City when it came out, and I fully blame that game for this chapter coming out so late. Well, that and the three 'papers' that I scrounged up from Twilight's old schoolwork under Princess Celestia. She's a smart filly, I gotta say. /egostroke
Seeing as how I have a bookmark folder labeled "Archive" with a few abandoned fanfics and blogs, I am happy there is progress being made. I finished chapter 3 and the way you communicate Twilight's depression is really well done; I get bummed just reading it!