Edited Chapter 2: Pinkie Pie's Party

My brother has sent me feedback for chapter two and I have made the following changes. Also note that even though I'm waiting for him to edit all chapters I've posted, I kind of want to finish and post the next two chapters anyway so that you guys have updates. It's been a while and I don't want to continue keeping you guys waiting for as long as you have. This might still take a while given that I have finals going on over the course of this week, but I'm determined to finally give you guys more of the story. So keep a look out and as always, thanks for reading.

Pony picture.