Editing and chapters 11 and 12

Hello everyone,

So I know it's been a couple of weeks since my last update with A Search for Something More, and I apologize for that. The next six chapters have been written, but I need feedback on them before I can post them - especially chapters 11 which contains relationship building between Rough Draft and Octavia and chapter 12 that is more Sunset Shimmer focused. My brother who recently graduated with his bachelors in creative writing has started to edit my story, unfortunetly progress is slow for him since he's usually pretty busy. He just finished his edit for chapter 1 and I have made the following changes. So just know that I'm still working on my story, it just might take a bit before I post the next two chapters. My goal is to finish part one of the story by the end of the year.

So that's pretty much what's up right now. Sorry that I'm taking a while to update and as always thank you for reading.

Here's a super cute pony pic.