Started new project.

Started a new sad, slice of life story that was inspired by a fan pic I came across. It won't be the first story inspired by this same image so I got the go ahead from the author of the first story as I didn't want to offend his work. My story is in now way affiliated with his with the exception of the same source of inspiration.......I hope it will be "awesome".
I'm Looking for a proof reader and maybe an editor if any-pony is willing.....hit me up.

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[P3RROHAMBRE]

I would be willing to proof-read and what not.

[Darth Sparkle]

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Outstanding. I will send you a mail on here when I get to a certain point. At the moment I am trying to refine the setting of the scene. I feel I have to much focus here....and I feel I need to improve the show vs. tell aspect of the story....the biggest problem is time....as a full time college student on top of studying for my A+ Certification as well as full time Daddy Day Care ...I simply have no time to continue working on it.

So here is a request for your opinion on my general idea how this is going to look. I intend the main character (you now which one) will have a conversation with the second character's location.....The main character will be visually responded to on occasion from a certain point of light in the sky with less frequent ethereal whispers............thats the general idea to how the story is going to play out.....what you think?