Onwards! · 9:32am Oct 1st, 2016
So, Chapter 10 of The Bridle Path is ready to go. I'm just waiting on a couple of beta readers to have a look over it and see if I've made any major errors. It should be live in around 12-18 hours from this post. Speaking of which I think Chapter 10 is going to be one of my strongest chapters yet. Why? Because I'm having folks double check me before I hit the 'Publish' button.
Chapter 9s problem was that I got locked into how I was seeing the chapter and I forgot to step outside of myself and try look at it as others would view it. I failed, and wound up basically rewriting the entire chapter because people made good, accurate criticisms of the chapter that I could not ignore.
Chapters 10 and 11 are the last two before all hell breaks loose in the story. Even Chapter 11 is going to have a major confrontation.
Queen Chrysalis, Relationship Counselor is basically on hold for now. I really want to my serious story out of the way before I push on with the light hearted stuff. But it is giving me time to put together ideas for future chapters.
Okay, recommendations:
Celestia, Chaos Edition Yup, someone went and did it. Good on them.
As a married man I can't tell you how spot on this is.
All the best to you and yours.
