Comics: Adapting To Night and Time Fades

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[Spiritus Arcane]

Unfortunately for her, Shine Bright could never be a princess while Twilight was still alive.

Umm, what? Twilight herself was able to become one while Celestia was still alive. And aren't Celestia and Luna dead? So wouldn't there be openings for Princesses? Sounds like Sunset needs to come back and smack some sense into a filly.

[Rated Ponystar]

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By Princess she means "Ruler of Equestria". Yeah, Twilight became a princess but who really rules at the court?

[Spiritus Arcane]

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Ah, might consider making that clearer, otherwise it makes Shine look like even more of an evil bitch for absolutely no reason. At least wanting control of Equestria is A reason.

[Guy with a Fimfic acount]

Oh no! The characters are too happy. I know, let's kill one off.