If you wouldn't mind reading this, I'd appreciate it. · 4:07pm Sep 10th, 2012
So first thing's first. I've been writing a novel since like, for fucking ever. I won't bother details because honestly I wouldn't know what to say. Just that I tried using an odd point of view to tell it, and I no longer like that view. So I'm writing it all over. It was about 2/3 done, minus editing. I'm not scrapping it, simple writing a comparative piece next to it in a different view.
Now, you might be asking yourself: So what does this mean for me? I'll tell you what it means for you. My writing efforts will be going there for most of my writing time. No more Remembering, no more Sister, no more BBSS. Not for a while at least.
BUT WAIT! No seriously, wait, don't go yet. I know what you're thinking: Why do I care again? I'll tell you why. You actually like my writing. Why, you ask? Hell if I know. Still, you like it, so you want to see more, that's how it works right? I think so at least. Please, tell me if I'm wrong.
I've got one final note. Please read it, I mean really, it's right here. Please edit All For A Sister. I know y'all don't have a lot of time, but if there's one thing i can't do, is edit my own crap. I mean, i edit well enough, but I need outside eyes. And here's what i need:
-Grammatical Errors, find them and destroy them.
-Tell me how the intro seems to work for you. Rushed? Uncontrolled? Uninformative?
-Phrasing. How does my story really work? Do I convey my messages? Is it awkwardly formatted? How is my word choice?
Now really guys and gals, dudes and chicks, gentlemen and ladies, bronies and pegasisters, whatever the fuck you wanna be called, I NEED you to ABSOLUTELY TEAR MY WRITING INTO PIECES. Then please take those pieces and torture their existence until slowly burning them into ashes. Then take those ashes and spread them over the earth, let the dust settle and then NUKE EVERYWHERE THEY TOUCHED.
So yeah, I want this work destroyed with your editing. Please?
Please?
I'll be more than glad to edit that for you, seeing that I have literally ALL FUCKING DAY at school on Tuesdays and Thursdays. XD
I actually might have to print out the pages and hand edit them without a word processor (blasphemy; I know.) then I'll photocopy them to ya. ;D
So feel free to send that to me whenever and remember that I will only be able to edit on Tuesdays and Thursdays.
349997 thank god you exist neo. the fic is here on fim, just check my page and youll see it. i should be surprised you havent read it yet, but i dont even tink you finished colors
regardless, ALL OF MY APPRECIATION 
have fun editing haha
350233 Obviously I couldn't finish "Colors". Hell, I have about 155 chapters of stuff that I didn't get to read any of because I was always gone this summer. I was in my own state like, I don't know, maybe 2 weeks out of the entire summer..?
But now that I am in one place for a while I can settle down and get some work done as well as read a few fan-fics.
So tomorrow during my breaks between classes I will give this story of yours a good read and I'll work on editing it as best I can. After all, I have roughly 6 hours of down time at the school. XD
Also when I get a lot of free time to sit down and read "Colors", I will.
350258 well aware
which is why i understand. at least youve got time to settle down now right? and i only say so because i crave your opinion most neo. i dont know why 
m already gave me his review, and i believe mister malseur did too. so that only leaves you.
350429 Aghhh now you're adding pressure to the situation. And thank you for valuing my opinions; that means a lot to me.
Things like that seem to make my day, so thank you again.
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350457 chzbronies.files.wordpress.com/2012/01/my-little-pony-friendship-is-magic-brony-we-love-you-too.jpg neo is best pony.
350469 buuuutttt for now adding 5 more hours to my 12hrs of sleep from last night sounds good. Then when I wake up it will be time for bed and I'll sleep for another 12hrs. sooooo good night.
That Scootaloo picture sealed the deal how can you say no when your staring at that
350548 haha, my little sister comes in handy so often.