In this story, the main character is dead and being reborn. She was an earth pony, and now she's going to either be a dragon or a hybrid of a dragon and one other species. This world is going to be based on some relatively complex RPG systems I made. Linked here is a spreadsheet talking
So, as the title says, I'm going to look at two stories and compare then, at least from the perspective of someone who read the first two chapters of each: No Nose Knows by Irrespective, and So you are suddenly a soon-to-be
This pertains to an argument that takes about 30 seconds of the episodes but is apparently the crux of its moral, so if you don't like spoilers, don't read.
There's an interesting horror story I just found. This person has not made any stories before, but their grammar and spelling is actually good, and their story is good enough to set a slight flutter in my heart. Not too much, and it was a bit confusing, but I would say it's worth reading.
Not ignoring. I also saves a screenshot of it should you wish to... I'll talk to you on Discord about it.