I'm back! Sort of. I've been working on a lot of different projects that I'd hope to upload someday, but unfortunately for me, work, hobbies, relationships and a number of other things seemed to get in the way quite considerably. One of the biggest problems I have had is focusing on a project with little support, and little exposure. Once I get feedback, I really start to get the ball rolling;
So, as you've... probably known for an agonizing long while... I've been working on a new story, set in a future Equestria with steampunk-age technology. I would really appreciate some pre-readers for opinions on the prologue, and possibly an editor, but that's not totally necessary, as I'm comfortable reading some stuff again and fixing it myself.
Do you know what it feels like to be alone... to feel empty... to just never want to wake up again... to just find someone, know matter who, and hold them tight and just cry?
Hey guys, you know how I was thinking about getting some help on my stories and things? WELL, NOW I NEED IT! :3
I'm looking for proofreaders, pre-readers, and people willing to give constructive criticism so when I release my new story it's as refined as possible. I would very much appreciate any help you guys would be willing to give.
(Okay guys, I've finished the VERY LONG description of the story, and I want to see if you think it's well written and entertaining. I also want to tip you guys off about what's actually going on in the story so you have an easier time making and perfecting your OCs. Without further ado, here's the FRICKING DESCRIPTION.)
You guys hear about that stuff about Iran and Israel and how Canada stood up and actually did something about it? Fuck, man, I hope we don't have to start invading before Iran starts World War III.
349723 US has their flag based the 50 states... and whatever the red and white lines mean....
Some of the other flags sort of make me wonder why they are the way the are..... Canada has maple leaf..... China has a star.... Germany has black yellow and red (I believe) not sure what those even mean...
349747Lol... So the only symbolism is the colors... tha heck? Why add a leaf on it then.... I would assume the flag would look quite bare with just the colors red and white on it....
I don't know but the picture he posted is perfectly fine for me what kind of browser are you using? Internet explorer? Safari,Opera,Firefox,chrome or what not?
350278 Ah ha safari now that explains everything it has a pretty strict image policy and coding and often struggles over them but all the other wise is better then chrome firefox
Can you give me an article or something?
349436 Sure, here.
Article.
349461
I used to live in Iran when my dad worked for an oil company
True story bro
Suddenly, Patriotism!
Don't forget that you're technicaly still part of the British Empire
'Fuck, man, I hope we don't have to start invading before Iran starts World War III.' - Chuckles
I hope World War 3 doesn't involve nukes...... nothing ruins a perfectly good planet than a Nuclear Apocalypse.
349560 Huh.
349561 I'm a filthy colonial.
349574 Nothing left to rule.
349608 Canada, aye. Home of the beaver........
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Canada confirmed as a Jewish puppet state.
349623 And the wolf.
349633 Picture is broken.
349659 How come Canada has a maple leaf on their flag and not a Beaver?
349706 Because pancakes? Fuck if I know.
349723 US has their flag based the 50 states... and whatever the red and white lines mean....
Some of the other flags sort of make me wonder why they are the way the are..... Canada has maple leaf..... China has a star.... Germany has black yellow and red (I believe) not sure what those even mean...
349742 Let me look it up.
Okay, the white means peace and honesty, the red means bravery, hardiness, strength and valour, and the leaf means absolutely jack shit.
349747Lol... So the only symbolism is the colors... tha heck? Why add a leaf on it then.... I would assume the flag would look quite bare with just the colors red and white on it....
349660
I don't know but the picture he posted is perfectly fine for me what kind of browser are you using?
Internet explorer?Safari,Opera,Firefox,chrome or what not?The leaf is for maple syrup numbnuts!
349754 I think so too. I don't exactly understand what the founders of my country were thinking when they used a fucking LEAF for our flag.
349822 Safari. And yes, I hate Internet Exploder.
349842 Are your numb nuts numb because they're tired of making a different kind of syrup?
350278 Ah ha safari now that explains everything it has a pretty strict image policy and coding and often struggles over them but all the other wise is better then chrome firefox
351516 I see.
351594 Dun dun dun... anything is better than Internet Explorer.
351808 Internet
ExplorerExploder.352252
InternetExplorerFriternet Exploder Supreme352269 Fries with that?
352309 If you count it frying your computer then yes...... heck slop some ketchup on it too.
352310 SECRET VIRUS SAUCE.