Apr
28th
2016
While Rocks Sleep · 3:21pm Apr 28th, 2016
My nose itches and it's not dust. For all I know, well, the story I just submitted has not that much of a hook. You already know the usual stuff: HiE, rule 63, X does Y, etcetera. But I feel, it's still not quite 'moving' in any other interesting way. Disproportionate lack of dialogue may be a reason.
And I have a bad feeling about introducing a character. It's been planned, but may appear as "lol wat dis has to do with that" So there.
I shall persist, for now. At least I won't feel as much time has been wasted, maybe. I aboose commas, you know. It's my sin, silly. Story has been in "waiting for approval" for six hours, it may not be good.
