Tip of the Iceberg: The Mare in the Sun · 6:51pm Apr 17th, 2016
Hey guys,
Sorel here for a post chapter II journal.
By the end of chapter II, I hope I have gotten most of your attention with how the story is being laid out. I am mostly giving this journal because, well, I haven't seen much activity about the latest chapter. I'm not sure why, but I hope as more chapters are posted that more people will want to read and get involved.
I'm working on submitting my chapters to groups. The prologue is mostly submitted to groups at this time, but the others? Not so much. Maybe that is part of the problem.
Right now, I have not written a letter with chapter III. I might start later today, but I got to plan it out and see where I want the chapter to go by the end. Compared to the last story I wrote, we are well on track to exceeding far beyond 50,000 words
But what do you all think so far? What do you like? What are you curious about still? How is the writing?
Let me know either here or on the individual chapters. ;)
Quick shoutout to the gang who is helping me out with this.
@DragonaDeMetal is responsible for overlooking the story as a whole. She lets me know what she likes, doesn't like, and has questions about within the lore, plot, and chapter drafts.
@FountainStranger is one of my proofreaders. She helps the technical side of things. So far, she's helped me catch small errors, paragraphing, but also encapturing the essence of characters within each chapter.
Lastly, @EbonyTails is my other proofreader. So far, she's been reading chapters critically so that the story flows well. If there is anything that seems out of the ordinary, she's on top of the ball with pointing them out.
Right now I'm just waiting on Chapter 3.