Revised update of "Free Ride on the Friendship Express"

Hey all,
I just replaced the old version of "Free Ride" with a newer, updated version that fixes most of the problems in the original contest submission. I also submitted it to Equestria Daily, so it would be a real treat if it gets posted there.

In other news, I'm thinking of working on a one-off story about Pinkie Pie in my spare time while also working on "The Outlaw," but life will get progressively more busy for me in the coming months.

Thanks for reading, and have a good night!