A Little Surprise will be... Delayed?????

Soo.... I'm thinking about slowing down on A Little Surprise.

Ironically, it's literally the ONLY story I've published so far. So for anyone who is following me or even is reading this, you most likely know me from that petty story.
It got like... 4 likes, okay? That 5th one was me because I wanted to see if I could actually like my own story. Pretty pathetic, I know.
I'm not really that dark of a person is the thing, so it's really hard for me to get into the vibe of things. I find myself procastinating and putting it off, even though I said it would be out in just a few days.

However... I'm getting ADDICTED to a story that I'm writing at the moment. It's turning out a lot more smoothly than A Little Surprise, which I felt was sort of forced and choppy, and I'm getting into the story a lot more.
I'm not saying I'll delete A Little Surprise, and I'll work on it from time to time, but it won't be coming out in "a few days".
I'm really sorry to those of you who were eagerly awaiting the next chapter, and if I get enough support for it, I will ABSOLUTELY make it for you. As a writer on a public site, it's my job to appeal to my fans, and that's excactly why I'm slowing down. I want my stories to have the best quality for my readers. This will make my stories more popular, so I can receive constrictive criticism, and know what to improve on. I want to make this clear, I'm NOT putting A Little Surprise on hold, or deleting it. Just slowing down so I can get more into the story, and get more into the vibe.
Another reason I think the story isn't getting as much attention is that I rated it Mature. It was going to get pretty gory... But I think this repelled a few readers, especially since many have blocked the Mature tag. My story that I'm currently working on is Teen, so it will probably get a few more readers.

Last note: I am a new writer, so you'll have to bare with me! I have hardly any fans yet, but that's okay! I know that to get fans I'll have to work for it. I'm only a teenager, and I'm still in school, so there's also less time to work on it. If your as impatient as me, I know you'll be disappointed at this post, but just try to hang in there! I'm working on the first few chapters of this next story so I can keep up better, and it should be out soon to make up for the delay on this story!