Spinning to a New Tune (Chapters 1-3 Rewrite)

So I've received a good amount of feedback about my first story and all I got to say is... everybody is absolutely right.

The only reason I haven't updated yet is the fact I need to rewrite parts of the chapters I currently have out. This is especially true for chapter 1, I now realize that. I wanted to let anyone who might actually read this know, when the next chapter comes out go back and reread from the start. Because I guarantee you will need to read them to know all the changes I will have done. I will also put this in the authors notes at the end of chapter 4, but I thought I should do this too.

Thanks for the tips and suggestions guys, and remember positive comments and constructive criticism only make a writer/story better.