IMPORTANT!! REVAMP EDITORS MUST VIEW THIIS!!

Okay so I just got through the damnable editors omnibus, and damn...... we must be perfect. There is little to no room for grammatical error. So we must make this PERFECT. No grammatical mistakes whatsoever. For those who have already turned in their edited work, I need to to go through it again. You all (I have already edited it to the best of my ability) have to HEAVILY go through it with a fine tooth comb. It is no longer about speed, it is now all about precision. We have to go through BOTH chapters to be safe.

one more thing.

THIS IS THE FINAL PHASE.

That's right, after months of hard work, we are almost done. On the final step. The story is good. You all know somber? Author of "Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons" the fic that surpassed the original "Fallout Equestria" in viewership and popularity? Yea him. He has said the story is EQD worthy. He also was the one who helped me improve my skills when I first started. So we got this! There is no way we can fail, as long as we give our 110%!

IT IS TIME TO FINISH THIS!!

INSPIRATIONAL SONG BELOW!

Comments

[tajjetone]

That song is my favorite PMV ever. Holy shit.

And if you need, I can help. Although I doubt you need more people. I wanted to be an English major except I'm not creative.

[Eyes of Avo]

Cool ill give it another look. Also very inspirational

[Luz]

YES SIR!

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[Captain Literal]

305030Well are you good with grammar? If so, you qualify! I already got the creative stuff, I just need the grammatical stuff.

[Captain Literal]

305036 Thanks!!

305037 GOOD! NOW GET TO WORK SOLIDER!
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[zmuscle]

cant wait oh and i love this song

[Captain Literal]

305163dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia2.png

[tajjetone]

305042

Yeah, I am. Send me whatever you need looked over, or a link (is it just that Fallout crossover you posted?) and I'll be as annoying as possible. I was my Grammar teacher's (least) favorite student. Wasn't my fault; that example was a participle.

Edit: I will shit grammatical fury and you will drown in it. You're fucking dead, kiddo.

[Captain Literal]

305634 It be Princess Luna's School of Magic,l it has been posted for some time now,

[Captain Literal]

305634 Please send me the corrections via PM, or email [e-mail]/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia2.png

[tajjetone]

305667

Your grammar is terrible.

[Captain Literal]

305681Hey! it ain't that bad...dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl2.png

[tajjetone]

305742

I'm just going to send you an edited and commented .docx. I hope you have Microsoft Word.

EDIT: lol pluperfect scrub

[Captain Literal]

305749Umm, I kinda don't. why don't you just use google docs?dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_O_O.png

[tajjetone]

305757

Will it save my pretty formatting and bold and italics? I make my comments bold and italic and commented out with // just because SOME AUTHORS SEEM TO NOT NOTICE THEM AND END UP WITH THEM IN THE FINISHED PROJECT

ALMOST AS IF THEY DIDN'T READ

SO I HAVE TO GET THEIR ATTENTION

[tajjetone]

305778

Or I could use .rtf

that might work

[Captain Literal]

305778 that, and it allows you to place comments at the parts you edited.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png

[tajjetone]

305791

Meh, you can check your original.

I'd better see an update to Rainbows for this

[Captain Literal]

305798 Okay fine mr. grumpy pants.

(Right after I finish this update for The New Pony in Town.)

[tajjetone]

305801

I'm about 1000 words through but it's slow going with grammar like yours. mostly kidding

is that any good should I read it

[Captain Literal]

305804You know what?
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[tajjetone]

305814

That's not even relevant. Wait, what am I saying? Fluttertroll is always relevant.

And now I'm like... 1800 words through. It looks like you got tired and started making mistakes near the end, so it's a good thing I started at the end and went backwards.

>my logic

EDIT: Why not just take one of the vectors I posted? The avatar is so low-res and /inferior/.

[Captain Literal]

305829 No idea, also my big philosphy in life is "The best way to think logically, is to think illogically."

Also, yes I do tend to get tired near the end of chapters, but that's why I have editors to yell at me for that.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia2.png

[Luz]

Chapter 1 ☑
Chapter 2 ☐

EDIT:
Chapter 2 ☑

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Post to EQD! Good luck!