Chapter paragraph and editing changes.

Just to let you guys know, I have made some adjustments to the chapters. First of all I have moved some paragraphs around. Everything is still in the same order as before, but I've moved a few paragraphs from the end of one chapter to the beginning of the next one to smooth out the overall flow and equalize out the word count a bit.

Also, and more importantly, corrections have been made to the first two chapters! Big thanks to the studious SarfTheMagnifico for taking the time out to make the corrections! My poor editor is very busy though, so if anyone can lend a hand (or hoof, or wing, or horn I don't care,) to helping out with editing we would all appreciate it! Just sent me a PM or leave a comment if your interested, or no where I could find someone who might be!

Thanks for all your support guys, hope you enjoy the stories!

Comments

[PhallenFoenix]

It would help if you said which story you were talking about :)