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BronyDerp117


A dood from the west. I'm not a brony anymore and I haven't posted here since I was teenager, but I hope you enjoy the few stories I managed to finish back then!

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  • 554 weeks
    “Don't cry because it's over. Smile because it happened.”

    Hey everypony, as you know I'm BronyDerp117. I've been a brony for about 15 months and I've been a member on FiM Fiction for around 14 months. Well, I'm making this blog post to tell you goodbye.

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  • 578 weeks
    Finished

    I finished editing Isn't It Great To Be Different! I fixed a good amount of grammar errors and I added a few details here and there. Nothing that changes the plot, just a few details here and there that I felt I should add. It's really nothing to re-read over, in case you're wondering.

    And I'm keeping the title the same.

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  • 579 weeks
    Editing "Isn't It Great To Be Different?" And Thank You

    So, I'm gonna go through "Isn't It Great To Be Different?" and fix the many, many, painfully many grammar errors. I'll also be adding bits and pieces here and there as I write. I may do it all tonight or it might take a few days. I also might be changing the title. How do you guys like the name "A Different Gold" ?

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  • 582 weeks
    Updates And Inspiration(More Like A Ramble, Actually)

    Hey guys, I have some updates/news. It's good, don't worry.

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  • 584 weeks
    I Edited Gray Rainbow... Again

    Yes, yes, I know, "BronyDerp! Stahp freakin' editing the damn thing and making me re-read it!" Sorry D:

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Aug
21st
2012

iMad Bro · 2:40am Aug 21st, 2012

*The thing related to The Bluestar Element is at the bottom, in case you were wondering why I tagged it.*

The Elements of Harmony certainly do not exist in my friend group. Yeah, you know Loyalty? Shattered.
So I've known this girl for four years. We are really good friends, and at one point I had a crush on her but got over it. Well, my other friends became friends with her too in middle school. We had our group, and this girl was in it. Well now we're in high school, and she's going to a different school than all of us. A few days ago, my best friend said he removed her from Facebook. I asked why and he said "we don't talk anymore." Note that my best friend had a major crush on her for a year. So when that happened I was like "dafuq?"

But that's not what pissed me off. Today, our friend group(except for two) was together hanging out and this was the conversation.

Me: "I kinda miss Chuy(that's the girl's nickname we call her bye, pronounced Chewie), I wish she wasn't going to Monte Vista."

Friend One: "Eh, I'm not really friends with her anymore. She like bitched out."

Friend Two(He is an ex of the girl): "Yeah, while we were going out I felt cheated on."

Best Friend: "I think she turned into a whore. *Looks at me* Sorry, but she kinda did."

Me:" What the fuck? How is she a whore?"

Best Friend: "I dunno, I-I just, she just kinda is."

*They continue to insult her*

Me: Trying my absolute hardest not to rage. On the inside:"what the fuck happened to loyalty?"

Needless to say, I'm really fucking pissed. In 5th grade I transferred to a new school. This girl, Chuy, was my first friend at the school. Yes, she has changed a lot, but she's still one of my closest friends. And she was really close with those other three as well, that's why is makes me so God damn pissed that they betrayed her like that. I mean, she's going to a new school with all strangers, and some of her closest friends just decide they don't like her anymore. This probably just sounds like High School drama, but this seriously pissed me off. I wish I was one chapter further In The Bluestar Element, so I could write the rage scenes in it while I'm mad. I could just pour all of my anger onto paper(Internet paper of course).

*Sigh* I don't know what to do. I need some way to vent out this anger. Should I talk with my friend? Should I tell the girl? Should I do nothing?

GRAA RAAAAGE.

If anypony has some nice, calming music or some advice, I'd love to hear it. Oh and yes, there will be a chapter in The Bluestar Element with heavy rage. Predictions? Leave in the comments.

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Comments ( 10 )

Well I had to leave a lot of friends behind when I moved up to PA. (I was originally from Mississippi). It was heart breaking but My friends and I got over it and we remembered each other for a while before we drifted apart. My guess is that either your friends some what feeled betrayed that she left to go to another school and is probably making new friends. It could be that they are kind of feeling that she shattered the loyalty between all of you. However, if this is the case they should get over it soon hopefully... Then again I'm no expert on these things. I hope this helped you in some way, shape, or form. :twilightblush: I hope the sistuation gets better! Here is some calming music, well at least I find it calming.

301044 That's the thing though, she didn't want to go to that new school. Her parents forced her. And they know that.
Thanks for the song though, it helped...
Until Loyalty by MandoPony came on my iTunes. :twilightangry2:

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I'm glad I helped in some way. I really do hope that the situation gets better! And I'm a good listener so if you ever need to take I'll listen... Okay that's just pushing it I'm sorry! Anyway I wish you a great day :twilightsmile:

301078 *Night :derpytongue2:
By the way, any estimate on the arrival of re-write?

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Actually I'm literally writing it right now. I'm almost finished so if it isn't up by 2:00 then it should be up at around 10 tomorrow. Maybe a little later on a fact that I have to babysit my little brother and sister. But it should definately be out soon! And when I say "have a great day" it means that if it is night then you should have a great day tomorrow! :pinkiehappy: that or Pinkie Pie will make you smile!!!!! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

301100 Lol, that made me laugh. Grasias :twilightsmile:
I'm writing a new chapter for The Bluestar Element right now. I want to get this chapter over with so I can get the rage in Chapter 11 and just pour my anger onto the chapter.

Writing is the best medicene!
:pinkiegasp:
I MEAN SECOND BEST! Laughing is the best medicene, writing is second!
:pinkiehappy:
phew!
And I'll be looking for the chapter updates unless... nevermind it's not the other story you wrote. AND NO I AM NOT SAYING YOUR STORY IS BAD!!!! I just can't read too sad or depressing stories on account that I get this horrible feeling in my stomach that just wants to make me burst out into tears.:fluttercry: I'm positive that it is a great story though! I'll be looking for that update!:twilightsmile:

301138 The Bluestar Element isn't that sad, its just dark. A young mare wearing a mask to cover up her horrible past, and things happen when all of her secrets become known to the mane 6, who have developed a fast friendship with the young mare.

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No I'm actually reading The Bluestar Element. I was talking about Gray Rainbow. Just the summary gets me depressed and the picture doubles that! But knowing my curious nature I'll still probably check it out one day. Then cry... then read it again... and the loop continues...

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