Pinkie Catches Twilight Meant to be First Real Comedy Attempt

I failed. Can you tell? I got the first like on the story after 6 dislikes. It has had a consistently 50:50 like:dislike ratio since then. Literally all my other 'comedy' fics (Which were written on a whim even compared to my other stories and had no thought put into them) somehow have better ratings.

Welp, time to huddle up in my room and hate myself for a week and suddenly forget I ever wrote it. Then again, I did that with every story I wrote...

Also, the comments section of the story is cancer.