I'm not usually not one for the whole bloggin' thing, but...

Why not? First time for everything, right?

Really the only point of this post is to say that I've gone back and bolstered Chapter 2 of Outlaw a bit.

I've long felt it's been my weakest chapter, and I really felt like I owed it to myself to fix that. It's mostly unchanged; for the most part I've just added detail and clarification where it was needed, as well as expanding upon Mach's thought processes and character traits a bit. Apart from that, some things have been tweaked to better link up with the rest of the story at large. Again though, no drastic changes.

So, just felt like all of Outlaw's readers should know. Sorry it couldn't be a new chapter this early, but 11 is in the works and I really needed to get this done for peace of mind.

Comments

[Tonto the Trotter]

Hey dude, nice of you to edit chapter 2. Me and my editor are currently working through my own story to improve it. Fans do generally appreciate it when you show you haven't forgotten the earlier chapters. I'm glad I waited to read chapter 2, I'll give it a read soon, I liked chapter 1 btw.