Nov
28th
2015
When will Flash Saga Hiatus End? · 10:04pm Nov 28th, 2015
The Hiatus will probably end once I get somepony to Proofread my story because the reviewer said main problem was grammar and event description. So as soon as I get a Proofreader to show me all the problems then Hiatus will end. Once that is done I will making an update version Flash Saga blog. That will include better info, as well as how many chapters are going to be in each story. Because I will be changing up the range of Chapters from 4-6 to 5-8.
I will be writing a blog to tell anypony when Cold Vlight will be up. And the day after first chapter is up, I will post info on characters I will be exploring in this Saga, Canon and OC.
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Lighttone GryphonStar · 105 views
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I would like to proofread, but English is not my first language. I need a proofreader myself..
But yeah, you had some grammar mistakes. Like at the last chapter's last sentence.
3594342 So your willing to Proofread the Flash Saga, or just first story, Flash and Nox.
You sure want me to proofread? Because I have some grammar problems too. But if you're sure, I can only proofread " Flash and Nox"
3594587 well yes, I would like somepony to at least see my alter version Flash and Nox, at least, a good look through to see if I missed any mistake. Now I mean alter version is that I have alteration to original version, as well did some little grammar checks myself, and I just simply want to have somepony else give it a quick look through to see if my new version is still readable.
And who better then somepony that doesn't have English as their first language, because if somepony like you noticed my mistakes, I can only imaging how many more that reviewer saw that he/she did not tell me about.
Anyway I will PM you the Gdoc link.
And I have also decided to get two proofreaders, so don't worry too much, what I mostly want from you is how it looks from the predictive of somepony who doesn't have English as a first language.