Continuity Issues · 6:20am Nov 8th, 2015
Just spent about two hours rewriting parts of some chapters because I made a continuity issue with one of the characters in the story. Thank you Fionn for pointing out my errors. This is why I wanted to find someone who knew both MLP and Dresden to help me proofread.
But I've fixed the error in the current chapter. So, if you read chapter seventeen of Agent of Chaos already, please go back and read it again, or at least the Marcone's Estate scene. It has been changed. One of the later chapters will reflect this change also, so if you don't reread chapter seventeen, you'll notice the change then.
Other than that, everything else should be fine. I am going to have to go back and look at already released chapters for other errors such as Mrs. and Miss being misused. I also have had homonyms pointed out to me. I can't promise that will be fixed cause unless they are pointed out to me, I may not notice them. As I said homonyms may be my bane.