Follow up to first ever fic post

Heya, Eclypsed here. I have no clue how these things work so I might as well just keep going xD

So about twenty four hours ago I was chilling with a friend, we sorted all the clop fics by rating and went to the last page, browsing through the comments and having blast seeing some of this stuff. I remember my favorite piece of advice for a new writer was "You should go out and just watch people, so you can see how normal people act." xD

So I was getting a little worked up, and also pretty drunk, and I said, "Why do so many people have all these super short fics that are just terrible? It really should not be very hard at all to write something saucy and short"
And so I did

Well I got like 70% of the way in and passed out on the couch, but waking up in the morning I finished up the story and started the process of becoming an uploader. I asked so many questions, about tags and about descriptions, about a title.
I feel really bad about my title, "Celestia Being Deep" was just a working title when I was drunk but I couldn't think of anything better sober. I was aiming for something silly that also drew attention, I don't know how well it worked because I literally have no other metric for it...

Wrapping up, I think I have talked about pretty much everything. I wish I knew of places where I could submit my stuff to get reamed. I have not looked but I was really hoping for somebody to just see the obviously shitty fic and just really tear it apart in the comments.
Maybe I will search up something tomorrow.