Revamp - Luna's Throne

So I went back and revamped Luna's Throne. I was never really happy with how it turned out, and after getting some REALLY detailed feedback of it's literary failings from my submission to EQ, I was even less satisfied with the end result. But finally, low and behold, my editing mode kicked in, and I did some rewriting! I think it flows a little better now; there may be more minor tweaks in the future while I perfect it.

But in the meantime, if you'd like to reread Luna's Throne and let me know what you think of the changes, I'd sure apprecaite it! http://www.fimfiction.net/story/284146/lunas-throne

Have a good night, everybody!

~River