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Fourth Blog! A Little Help, If Able? · 1:47am Aug 25th, 2015

Me again!

And this time, I might need your help.

Firstly, I thank you guys for the (mostly) good reception of "Mind Games". A little encouragement has caused me to turn this one-shot story into a multishot one, and ideas are already churning in my head. In some way, Sunset's manipulative approach toward the Dazzlings - or maybe even someone else, directly or indirectly - is noticed by her friends, and they come to the conclusion that Sunset might be returning to her old ways. At this point in time, they don't seem to have too fond of an opinion toward her already, and upon learning this, they distance themselves away from her more and more. However, that is where my train of thought ends. There was an idea that in the end, Sunset reunites and reconciles with her friends just in time to overpower their enemies, and in another end, the Sirens end up victorious over the Rainbooms. But I have no idea which way I should turn here!

So please, help me out? Even a tiny bit of advice would be helpful, whether you post it in the comments below or PM me about it. I thank you greatly for it in advance.

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Could always have the battle end in a stalemate, where both bands lose something. (Sirens lose the pendents and Rainbooms lose they're ability to magic or something.)

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