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"Every one of us is one more piece in this puzzle called life. Now if only I could get a glance at the box to find my place...."

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  • 257 weeks
    "Innocent" Combat Report

    These are the official numbers from each battle in Innocent. More battles will be added as they occur. Spoilers below: Be warned!


    Battle of Greenspring Glade (Chapter 12):
    Total Starting Troops:

    • Equestrian Forces: 372

      1. 370 Royal Guard: 50 Lances, 50 Mages, 150 Fliers, 120 Swords

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  • 352 weeks
    Inquiry

    I'd like a bit of feedback on some technical issues surrounding Innocent.

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  • 405 weeks
    On With The Show

    After the diversion that was PonySide, my other story, Innocent, will begin updating again. The first order of business will be the addition of prefacing micro-chapters for each Act, which will attempt to separate them more distinctly. Please let me know if they help or hinder the transitions, as this is a bit of an experiment. There have also been some moderate edits to the first

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  • 457 weeks
    Change of Pace

    I am on the verge of posting the final chapter of Act II for Innocent. With that milestone, I am going to take a short break from that story. I would like to try one of the other ideas I've had but I'll only be doing one before getting back into Innocent. Below are some preliminary descriptions of the ideas I'm looking at. I'd rather do the one that will be enjoyed by those watching than just

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  • 476 weeks
    This is why we rehearse...

    As stated in the Author's notes of Chapter 7: Under Moon and Star, Part 1, I had been trying to fit everything in that I had planned. As it turns out, I did miss a rather important detail. I've updated the ending portion (just after they return to Ponyville) to include the missing part. It is recommended that readers go back and make sure they catch the change. It has a lot to

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Aug
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2015

Change of Pace · 3:11am Aug 1st, 2015

I am on the verge of posting the final chapter of Act II for Innocent. With that milestone, I am going to take a short break from that story. I would like to try one of the other ideas I've had but I'll only be doing one before getting back into Innocent. Below are some preliminary descriptions of the ideas I'm looking at. I'd rather do the one that will be enjoyed by those watching than just throw one out and watch it go stale. While I'm picking through the options (And hopefully the feedback), I'll be posting a one-shot after I've finished polishing the final version. With no further ado, these are the options I'm considering:

Option One:
Title: PonySide
Tags: [Human][Crossover][Dark]
Rated Teen for violence and strong language.

Terran Republic oppression. New Conglomerate rebellion. Vanu Sovereignty ambition. Deep divisions have formed between the once united factions on Auraxis, and with each passing day of ceaseless fighting, they grow deeper. Whether by the power of Vanu, the dictates of fate, or perhaps a less-than-harmless prank by a certain mischievous spirit, representatives of these groups meet in a most unlikely place. Cut off from the rest of their faction and everything that made the endless war so endless, these confused and cautious soldiers must survive each other and the new perspectives these ponies bring to their struggles.

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Planetside 2 crossover.

Option Two:
Title: Servitude
Tages: [Human][Alternate Universe][Sad][Tragedy]
Rated Teen for violence, moderate language, and Flash Sentry

When a human disillusioned with the way of the world is given a chance to live in Equestria, he can think of nothing he wants more. But Equestria is not as open to change as either he or his hostess believed. Andrew and Twilight find themselves back to back, fending off those who would do anything to stop what they fear from coming to pass. Desperate to make this experiment work, Twilight resorts to extreme measures to keep her new friend from being lost in the chaos. Equally determined to protect the Princess who has given him the greatest gift he’d ever received, Andrew pledges his life to her as her personal guard. What he doesn’t know is that his word isn’t all that binds him to her side.

Option Three:
Title: A Changeling of the Guard: The Infiltration
Tags: [Adventure][Tragedy]
Rated Teen for violence, mild gore, and suggestive situations

The mission is anything but ordinary. The stakes have never been higher. The Queen has set her eyes on a juicier prize than a few infiltrators can provide. Canterlot is in the midst of preparations for the biggest event in years: A Royal Wedding. She is determined to risk everything on this and the Swarm is pulling out the stops to make sure this goes off without a hitch.

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This is meant to be a behind-the-scenes type story that attempts to smooth out the plot holes from this episode while still staying mostly believable. I intend to stick to canon as much as possible and only taking excess liberties on the side story I’m telling.






As I said, these are the ideas I'd like to try out but I'm only going with one of them. If any look like something you'd be curious about, drop a comment saying so and we'll see where we end up. I'll have the last part of Act II for Innocent in the next week or so and the one-shot will be going up maybe a week after that. Once I've heard some feedback here (Or just decided on one), I'll start putting out the next story.

As always, I hope my audience is enjoying the show,
Puzzle Piece

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The votes have been tallied, (even though none of them were tallied here :facehoof: ) and the consensus is Option One. I will be uploading the first chapter of Ponyside soon and hope this short respite from Innocent is well received.

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