A Jewel of a Problem Chapter 19, Pre-Reader Phase · 4:49pm Jul 22nd, 2015
Chapter 19 is now nominally done, and it is time I call upon fans of the story to come to my aid and pre-read the chapter. What I am looking for when it comes to the pre-reading itself is the following:
-Grammar and Spelling errors, naturally
-Suggestions on whether some bits could be simplified, or if they might need expanding
-general thoughts on each section of the chapter, whether you think things make sense or feel rushed at all, and ways to try and fix it.
As I said, the chapter is nominally done. I theoretically could put it up now, but I think it might do with some polishing, and maybe some tweaking.
So, if anyone is interested in giving it a read and following the above, say so down below in the comments and I will send you the link. Note that I will be looking for people to have gone to the Gdoc and at least looked things over by Friday at the least, as I would like to try and get this chapter totally finished and brought up here on FIMFiction by Sunday/Monday.
I'm game, shoot me a note. I have some time between matches I'd he hap-bappy to peek.
I'd offer my help, but trust me. You don't want it.
Unfortunately, I cannot this time, as I've got my hands full with another story at the moment.
I got ya bb, throw me that link