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kotor511


K.o.t.O.R. No. 511 (Knight of the Old Republic), dedicated to keep the peace and security of my home and country, I slain evil beasts, do the knights justice, and fulfill the bidding of my liege!

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  • 463 weeks
    Improved "Cultures" chapter.

    After learning of the great support some of my readers gave this story, I felt obligated to improve the story a bit.

    I fixed some errors, rearranged some sentences, and changed the ending a bit.

    If you have some time and would like to have a quick laugh at this new development, feel free to read the story again, the changes though aren't that huge, just minor details.

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  • 468 weeks
    What is a pony?

    High up in the Towers of the Crystal Castle of the Crystal Empire, Celestia stood facing the Throne of the Emperor, looking smug like he alway's does with his green and violet glowing eyes.

    She spoke "Die monster! You don't belong in this world!"

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What is a pony? · 5:13pm May 16th, 2015

High up in the Towers of the Crystal Castle of the Crystal Empire, Celestia stood facing the Throne of the Emperor, looking smug like he alway's does with his green and violet glowing eyes.

She spoke "Die monster! You don't belong in this world!"

The dark lord of the enslaved empire, a stallion of black and dark grey colors, with a crooked read horn, only chuckled and took a sip from his glass of wine, then responded: "It was not by my hoof, that was once again given Flesssh," he hissed with a sound akin to a snake, "I was called her by Ponies! Who wished to pay me tribute!"

The Solar Diarch only looked in disgust at the emperor: "Tribute? You steal ponies souls! And make them your slaves!"

The emporor waited a few second, contemplating her words, then rose his glass to take another sip, "Perhaps the same could be said of all the religions", pointing a stare at Celestia, accompanied with a condescending grin.

The alicorn of the sun fumed in his response, "Your words are as empty as your soul, ponykind ill needs a savior such as you!".

With a cold glare, Sombra, king and emperor of the Crystal empire took another sip of his red wine, discarding the the glas beside his throne with a fast throw via telekinesis, and bellowed:

"WHAT IS A PONY?! A MISERABLE LITTLE PILE OF SECRETS!!" The emperor stood up from his thrown and pointed a hoof at the Solar princess, "BUT ENOUGH TALK! HAVE AT YOU!" Throwing out his cape.

And so, the most epic fight between good and evil, in a century after Discord's banishment, began, destined to end with the victory of light, but at a great cost that would vanish the empire for one thousand years.

Story idea, what do you think?

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Comments ( 1 )

Somebody's been playing Castlevania, Richter is cool.

So is Alucard.

So also too is Maria.

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