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Deadpan29


My primary contribution here is to be the beta-reader for sopchoppy's work A Friend In Need. By all means, go read it and see my blog for extra material.

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  • 332 weeks
    What it was like (Omake for A Friend In Need by sopchoppy)

    Excerpt from Rainbow at Night: Memories of the Bringers’ End

    From Chapter 5: Wards

    Vista​

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  • 380 weeks
    Friend in Need PHO Interlude

    A PHO interlude for A Friend in Need. Comes during or after the events of "11 - Repercussions".

    Note: Fimfiction doesn't allow for some of the formatting commonly used in these interludes posted in other locations. I have tried to adjust for readability with what I can do here.

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    3 comments · 694 views
  • 414 weeks
    Unicorn Thoughts (A Friend in Need Omake) (GNU Pratchett)

    I've been on a Pratchett kick lately. Not just his fiction, but also his collected essays. Which led to this.

    Set in the universe of A Friend in Need.

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    2 comments · 554 views
  • 444 weeks
    Gangs of New York: Earth Bet

    Some world-building for A Friend in Need, expanding on the list of groups operating in New York City in Interlude 12.

    Gangs of New York: Earth Bet

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  • 448 weeks
    A classified memo from Costa-Brown

    TOP SECRET//SI-OMICRON 3478-TRINKETS//PRT KEYHOLE-GOLDEN OBELISK//NONONPROT
    TS//SI-O 3478-TKS//PRT K-GO//NNP

    May 17, 2011

    From the desk of Chief Director Costa-Brown:

    Modified Master/Stranger protocol case Triangle/Sunflower is to be enacted with regards to the following parahumans:
    ▪ Agent Argent – Millennium Four
    ▪ Alexandria – Protectorate

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May
14th
2015

sopchoppy's A Friend In Need: Luna's Armor · 4:36am May 14th, 2015

I am the beta-reader for sopchoppy's story A Friend In Need, a crossover with the webserial Worm. As part of the back-and-forth of the beta-reading and editing process, I have generated a certain amount of supplementary material to expand and clarify some aspects of the story and its setting. First up, Princess Luna makes a dramatic entrance in the "Requiem for a Dream" section of this story and dons mystical armor for a great battle. Below are two images that sopchoppy agrees represent aspects of the armor and jointly should help the reader form a mental image of it.

First up, the overall design of this armor is something like this:

Particularly in the full coverage it provides and the blades on the wings. Note that the black protrusions from her raised hoof are intended to be a set of retractable blades built into the "boot" which are not part of the armor in the story. The armor in the story does, however, feature sharp edges on the exterior of the hoof-guards.

The second image captures much of the intended gothic-grotesque "feel" of the armor in the detail work adorning it. This is key in establishing a nickname given to Luna later in the story.

Again, that's the coverage of the first with the style-work of the second.

Credit to 1110soulite and Ziom05 for the images.

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Comments ( 3 )

Pictures do not seem to load for me at least.:fluttershysad:

3452730 They're up for me. I don't know what to say.

3453294 Now they load, too. Must have been some temporary hiccup...:twilightblush:

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