Constructive Criticism Helps · 9:53am Apr 26th, 2015
So one of the things I didn't do with my first series that I'm trying to do now, is listen to criticism and advice from my readers on what I can do to make things better. Lack of listening to readers is why (in my opinion at least) my first series really fell short. Since I don't have a solid editor to ask these things, you guys are my only help, other than my own brain. So anyone who has any thoughts on what I can do to make "The Exile" better than it is, shoot me up a message or leave them it in the comments. I read every comment and message. No really, I do.
Ok.
I really
Really
Reaaaallllllyyyy need to write a review for The Exile.
MY MIND KEEPS BUGGING ME TOOOOOOOO.
Well I have ti read the story first, then I'll tell you how to make the story better.
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