My first review! · 1:59pm Apr 2nd, 2015
Alright, I don't do these, heck I don't often have the urge to do these! But I found one story that seriously deserves a review and so here I am!
Story if found here: Destiny: Twilight Voidwalker
This story. This story, man. Let me first start off by saying that the only thing that throws me off about it is line breaks! Every time you have a new pony talking, line break!
Now onto the good stuff! This story has so many good points that I don't think I could say enough about it! The characters are wonderfully written! Their developments are excellent! The interactions are perfect! The fight scenes are top notch and engaging! The area descriptions are spot on! I've played Destiny before (only got to lvl10), and I'm familiar with the areas he talks about, but the descriptions are vibrant and distinct.
Now I don't know why this is on haitus! This story ends wonderfully, leaving very few questions unanswered. I just want to tell Backround Voice that he can take this story off haitus and stick it on complete! He doesn't need to do anything else with it. Maybe give us a one shot to see where the other two mane six are, but it's not necessary!
Backround Voice? If you can hear me, come back to this story! Take back your ideas and keep working on this! Heck, stick it on complete and make sequels! This story deserves a slot on almost every one of my bookshelves, and I wish I could give you more than just a fave and a like on this story. This deserves to be featured!
I'm only going to do this once to not only to explain myself, but to appreciate an awesome fan!!!
I put Voidwalker on hiatus because I'm not done with it.
I have over 100 chapters literally planned out for the rest of the story.
But as of right now I can't write them.
As many don't know, I am a Mormon, and a missionary of the church of jesus christ of later day saints, and I've put my own personal pursuits on hold for the next two years. So as much I'd love to write & continue the story and finish it.
I simply can't.
And don't you worry, I've got ideas for years to continue writing for this website.
But that will all happen next year in 2016 when I return from my mission in december.
Thank you so much for reviewing my work. And I know I have much to improve on, but thats why I stopped, to gain inspiration and to learn more about why I wish to pursue writing as a career.
Thank you very much, and I'm really sorry, but I won't be responding to any more comments for another year and a half.
And... could you do me a favor?
Read the Landscape and WRITE you Scribe!!!
I know you have grand ideas of your own, and I look forward to reading your work one day.
So stay classy, and stay awesome!!
People like you are the reason I love to write... And don't let the critics beat you down, we can all be great, it's just about finding joy in our lives and living life one step at a time. (But also take criticism when its needed)
And if there is any advice I can give you now, its this...
Live... I've gotten most of my inspiration from just living its almost scary.
So have a good day... umm... Phazon! Sorry, had scroll up to find your name
And thank you again for the review!
- BackroundVoice
3234844 Hey, thanks for the comment! Glad for the advice!
And if you don't mind me asking, where will you be serving? I went to California, Long Beach on my mission. And by the year and a half, I take it you are a Sister?
3234882 Uhhhhh... no... I'm... sure I'm a dood...???
Anyways I've already been out for about 7 months I left in december.
I'm in the Idaho Twinfalls Mission.
It's pretty cool to meet another mormon brony. =)