Need someone to take a look at an experimental fic of mine

Hello again, fellow carbon-based lifeforms!

Lately, as well as working on chapter 2 of "The Study", I've been working on another project: "Abiogenesis". This thing is going to be my most ambitious fic yet. Perhaps too ambitious.

Basically, I need someone or something to look over what I've written so far and tell me what they think. If you're interested, here's a link: Abiogenesis

I must warn you, this fic is still in its early writing stages, so expect plenty of punctuation and grammatical errors.

Thank you!