Stories to short to be stories

Ok so here is the first story that couldn't be accepted, despite all my hard work but I'm still gonna put down.

Enjoy

A Trip to see my Brother – By Twilight Sparkle – By MelancholyIguana

It was a day just like any other
Where I wanted to go see my brother
But my friends caught on
And wanted to come along
And decided we’ll all go together

I got prepped and really must say
I was raring to be on my way
Buy my friends weren’t here yet
And I started to fret
For the trip would take more than a day

I almost jumped out of my skin
When outside I heard quite a din
Pinkie had all my friends
In a Mercedes Benz
And was waiting with her usual grin

She had never looked more alive
And I never would have thought that I’ve
Known Pinkie so long
But still was so wrong
She never said that she could drive

I jumped in the passenger seat
And put my bags down by my feet
I turned to the back
To look at the pack
Of friends whom I swiftly did greet

So we sped over each rolling hill
That the landscape before us could spill
The cars speed was insane
But I didn’t complain
We didn’t have time to kill

But the niggle in my mind didn’t rest
And was something I couldn’t protest
In her new founded invention
She failed to mention
“Pinkie when did you take your driver’s test?”

She turned with a smile “Oh Twilight,
Everything will be alright
Enough with the booing
I know what I'm doing
And there isn’t an obstacle in sight.”

The situation on me did dawn
As at her, I started to gorm
But I found it perplexing
And also quite vexing
Why answered in limerick form

Pinkie seeing herself as the master
Decided to go that much faster
But without training or ID
Crashed into a tree
Now were hospitalised and covered in plaster